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美联英语怎么样:六级写作范文及点评-艺术与幽默(上)

2015-01-21 16:20   类别:作文   来源:   责编:Dong

本期美联英语给大家带来六级写作范文及点评-艺术与幽默,欢迎阅读!

我们或许不能像伟人那样超凡脱俗,但可以时时借助幽默来使自己开心,使自己超脱尘世的种种烦恼。漫画就是这样的一种幽默形式。

  Art and Humor

Millions of people struggle out of bed each morning, fumble into some clothes, and make their way to a cup of coffee and the morning newspaper①. They need something cheerful to remind them that the rest of the day will be less difficult than getting up. This need may be the reason that many of them turn their half-opened eyes to the comics section of the newspaper as they sip their first cups of coffee of the day.

  Cartoons reflect the times and the troubles and worries of people. They give people an opportunity to laugh at themselves and at familiar situations. For example, a cartoon might say that the government of a country is responsible for the bad economy and also show the government leaders as a group of ridiculous people. Being able to use the leaders as scapegoats and to laugh at the leaders somehow makes people feel better about their situation.

  Cartoons also make people laugh at their own personal worries. Young people who are not always sure of how to act can smile at their awkwardness. Old people whose grown children pay little attention to them can chuckle at their neglect and loneliness. Students who have studied too little before an examination can laugh at their anxiety. Everyone’s problems are made bigger–than–life in the comics. Perhaps the problems seem funny because there is humor in something that is real being made unreal.

  A cartoon combines art and humor. When it is skillfully done, a simple line drawing and a few words can make people laugh. Their troubles seem less important, and they enjoy life more fully.

  行文点评

  这篇文章结构比较清晰。第一段提出观点:漫画可以令人快乐,作者用了struggle out of bed, fumble into some clothes, 形象地展示了一个大多数读者都非常熟悉的生活场景。第二、三段从公众和个人的角度说明,漫画反映人们的时代和生活特点;每段的第一句话都是主题句(topic sentence),即每一段都在第一句提出这一段的分论点,再对其加以论证。第四段总结全文,点明文章的主题。

  文中排比句的运用,比如第三段中对不同类型人的笑的描述Young people … Old people … Students …,也值得读者在写作中借鉴。

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